The original commentary for my 3rd chapter (formally Chapter 2), and how the smallest changes can make the biggest difference in a story.
All Chapter Commentaries
An introduction to why I do these commentaries (it's to help others), and a complete linked table of contents.
My final word on using AI to write your book….
You will deprive yourself of skills and knowledge and you will deprive yourself and your readers of your unique voice. Your story is your own, and can only be told by you.