Where it's been, where it's going, and the decision to move to Substack.
Dawn Patrol (no. 3) – Reposted from Patreon
The original commentary for my 3rd chapter (formally Chapter 2), and how the smallest changes can make the biggest difference in a story.
All Chapter Commentaries
An introduction to why I do these commentaries (it's to help others), and a complete linked table of contents.